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The Guild: A Prologue to Darkness Preview #1

February 12th, 2012, 10:58 pm

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Zalmikku
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And So It Begins!

Hey guys, lookie what I got, a preview for my upcoming comic, hand drawn and digitized. This is just a preview page, so it's not done 100% how the pages will look once I actually begin the project, but it's meant to show off generally, a couple of things that will happen, give me a few chances to practice drawing comics again(forgive me, I haven't drawn an actual comic page for quite a long time), and just to hopefully get you guys interested.

Couple of things.

1. This comic does star Zal and Mikku and such, but it's the story leading up too the point of which my sprites of them represent. Basically, in the sprites Zal and Mikku are around 18-20 years old, in this scene
and for the major beginning of the comic, they're around 11-13 years old. Hence why Mikku, Milan(previously known and Mikan), and Zal all look so different from their sprites.
2. Unlike this page and the other Preview pages, I will be going over the pages digitally in black and white so that they'll not only look better, but slightly more professional, and some special pages will be full colored and crap.
3. I'm looking for some trustworthy proof-readers to go over my scripts as I write them to make sure they're both Grammatically correct and that they just sound like how general people would actually talk. I'll be the first too admit that my dialogue tends to be kinda bleh. If you wanna help me out and end up getting written spoilers and such, you can find the comic here.
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=115897
I really appriciate anyone who's willing to help out, and you'll get mentioning as co-authors and all the fancy rot. I'll also eventually be looking for Advanced HTML help for making the comic's domain look all prettyful and add extra specialty pages and such.

I think that just about covers everything, so thanks for reading and look forward too the next couple of previews and such.

Mikku, Zal, and Milan belong to me.

Also, am I the only one who thinks Zal looks REALLY derpier than I intended for him too look in the last panel?

Posted at February 12th, 2012, 11:15 pm

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Looks Nice, I like it.

Posted at February 13th, 2012, 5:07 am

Tex
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Doesnt really look too much like Zal, TBH.

Also proofreader, right here.

Posted at February 13th, 2012, 7:44 am

Zalmikku
Posted by Zalmikku
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@Tex: But you're already part of the group.

And as for the Zal thing, it's both him when he's younger and he's a little down on his luck, to say the least. That and just my lack of practice at drawing in Comic style.

Posted at February 13th, 2012, 3:30 pm

Tex
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Ah

If its him when hes younger its makes sense, his hair just dint match what I'm used to with his sprites.

Posted at February 13th, 2012, 4:54 pm

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